Tuesday, 20 September 2016

Readers' Workshop - Week 10

I Need My Monster


In the story different monsters appear under the bed. 

Describe the monster that you would like to have under your bed.

E.g. My monster would have lots of fur to keep warm, strong arms to be able to move my bed and large bright eyes like a torch, so that she can light up the dark and we could make shadows.

102 comments:

  1. My monster would be very cute and cuddly. She would be rainbow and have a bow at the end of her tail. I would name her Lulu. She would always make me laugh and would always be there when I need her. She would be the best monster in the world.

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  2. My monster would always be there to keep my warm.It would be kind to everyone and make me laugh. My monster would have a bright yellow horn and a heart shaped belly.My monster would light up my day.I would love my monster.

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  3. my monster would have sharp claws to scatch with long hair to tie stuff up with and big red eyes to see with

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  4. The monster under my bed has one claw and plays with me. He has red claws and black eyes, tongue and nose. His tail is fluffy and straight. He loves eating roofs.

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  5. I would have a girl monster, with soft cuddly fur and big rosy cheeks as well as a nice fragrant smell.

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  6. my monster would have bright eyes that glow blue in the dark smooth golden claws that you have to sharpen with a pencil sharpener fury fur a very short tail that would only be a inch long

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  7. My monster would have red glow in the dark eyes
    It would have strong muscles to pick me up
    It would have a tail that can turn into anything
    And it would sleep so quietly that it would be easy for me to sleep.

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  8. A cheesy smile eats your sheets stitched up eyes scaly tail big black body enormous horns

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  9. my monster would be named Jeff and would be tiny,strong and would fly,his skin colour is green and he is skinny and only eats cheese burgers and plays video games all day.

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  10. My monster would have warm wings, it would have white fur,big cute eyes, 1 horn, 4 hooves, it would look like a unicorn with wings and she would be called Abby.

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  11. My monster would glow it would have a long curly tail,fluffy long red fur,three big eyes,stumpy arms,one big wobbly foot and it would love reading!

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  12. My monsters name is John . He would have a spiky back with a ginormous tail. He would be the colour black. He would be the strongest monster in the wold.

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  13. My monster we be cool and the best monster.My monster will have a long sharp tail with spikes two big red horns out his head and he will be red and the beast

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  14. He has a huge tail, sharp claws, pointy teeth and red eyes.

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  15. My monster would have sharp teeth.It would be blue with purple
    patches.It was have a very long tail.Black and red horns.And very awesome!!

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  16. My monster would be scary and big and it would have sharp teeth a really long tail and black spikes on its back and it would have red dots all over its tummy

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  17. My monsters name would be Fluffy. She would have small wings with a small body. Her fur would be pink and light blue with a small horn on the tip top of her haed

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  18. My monster would have scaly skin so it could shine in the moon light,sharp claws to scratch the floor,strong arms to hold my bed and green terrifying eyes.

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  19. My monster would have red fur with black spots.Her name is Deathling. Just one wack of her tail and you will be dead.

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  20. My Monster would have a long blue tail,blue fluffy fur,strong arms and great big eyes!

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  21. I would have a black monster with thick, sharp, electric blue claws, electric blue eyes and tail spikes, with the ability to breath lightning

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  22. my monster be will be a girl and have nails with nail polish
    and lips with lip stick a bow around her tail she would be my best friend and we would be rich

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  23. My monsters name is Bob.He belives that all man kind is pure.
    Bob would have a red tail with bright yellow spikes,a orenge tummy with white smiling skuls,feet and arms that are soft like pillows and white soft wings.Thats my monster.

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  24. my monster will have a bow and have nails and hair she will have lip stick on and have her hair tide up

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  25. My monster would have bright red fur to keep me warm, pink and blue horns for me to play with, she would also have a teal bow at the end of her tail and she would always be there when I need her.

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  26. my monster will have a bow and have nails and hair she will have lip stick on and have her hair tide up

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  27. My monster would have very sharp teeth.it would have purple fur with black patches.it would have a very long tail.red horns and super awesome 4 me!!!

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  28. my monster will have a bow and have nails and hair she will have lip stick on and have her hair tide up

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  29. Sebastian Montgomery9:43 am, September 22, 2016

    My monster would be big with acid saliva,teeth of solid blood,
    it would have 3 septiceyes and a tail made of the souls of dead children.He would have 3 horns made of Obsidian

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  30. I forgot my full stop/Seb.m9:44 am, September 22, 2016

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  31. It's name is Darin!!!

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  32. A girl rainbow monster named Farrah, she is ten years old,
    she has a horn on her head, she has sharp claws and nail
    polish that is pink. She also has a long tail that glows in
    the dark, she loves lolly pops and chocolate, her favourite
    animal is a kiwi and she has two monster friends named Ebony
    and Telisha. Farrah has a pet kiwi.

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  33. My monster would have sharp claws,red eyes,it is the colour dark green,black and light green and it would have a long tail that glows.

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  34. My monster would be a monster with light blue wings, it would breathe lightning,underbelly would be really light blue, would have about 15 cm claw and it would allow me to ride it

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  35. My monster would be shaped like a banana, smell like a banana and love bananas. In short my monster would be the best banana in the world

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  36. My monster would be a robot with a scream as a voice and a spiny head with black eyes and small whit dots in both eyes in short it would be an scary robot!!!!!!

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  37. my monster would be shaped like a chocolate and have a cow on it and chocolate claws.

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  38. n the story different monsters appear under the bed.
    5 if you count Gabe And 4 If You Don't Count Him
    Describe the monster that you would like to have under your bed.
    A Fluffy Looking Fox With A Cute Snore That Helped Me Sleep And He Would Come Out And Curl Up On My Bed.

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  39. my monster would be nice.and make me happy when i am sad.she would never make me scared either.

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  40. Describe the monster that you would like under your bed.
    i would like a mediam sized monster and his fur would be fluffy and blue

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  41. My monster would be a girl she would be kind and loving.She would be pink and blue.Her name would be Ice Cream.

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  42. my monster would be in a shape of a bear with big long claws ,massive teeth and it would glow in the dark.

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  43. In the story different monsters appear under the bed.

    Describe the monster that you would like to have under your bed.Bright yellow eyes like a torch with a long hairy back,slim hairy body, long tong and a small snout, and a big muoth.

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  44. In the story different monsters appear under the bed. yes

    Describe the monster that you would like to have under your bed.A creepy green monster that ghouls

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  45. My monster would be very large with large claws to scrape the ground and jagged teeth that smelled like rotten fish.

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  46. The monster that I would have under my bed would have long, sharp nails, a spotty blue coat of fur, yellow teeth and purple horns.

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  47. My monster would be black with red teeth a long white tail uncut claws.

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  48. My monster would be big strong and would pretect me when something scary is happening durring the night while im all snuggled up in my bed

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  49. My monster would be black with purple spots,blue eyes and a purple tail

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  50. My monster would have orange fur with small fangs,two strong arms,sharp claws and short legs.

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  51. My monster would have a purple body, long claws, ten eyes and tiny feet. It's teeth are pointy, sharp and brownie yellow.

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  52. My Monster would be slim, long tongue, fat mouth, thick fur, warm &cuddly

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  53. My monster would have shagged teeth gloomy green fur, and two horns he would have a long tail.

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  54. My monster was very big. It had sharp teeth and it smelt really bad.

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  55. My monster would be a boy it can glow it would have dark green eyes.It has a football head a little body.

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  56. My monster would have a long tail,sharp claws, lots of fur and razor sharp teeth. His fur is red and his teeth are peachy brown.

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  57. my monster would be big and tall,purple fur,long claws,sharp teeth and yellow horns.

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  58. Skinny tail, sharp claws noisy breath, blue fur big horns,

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  59. My monster would have long arms and a big belly. He would be as quiet as a mouse. It would glow in the dark so that I can see.

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  60. my monster would have big teeth a long tail and sharp nails.

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  61. My monster would have dark green fur with two menacing yellow teeth sticking out.He would have an over bite and a long fuzzy tail with grey spikes running down it.

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  62. My monster would be a boy it can glow it would have dark blue eyes.It and his fur is light green.

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    1. good work scott from danni

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  63. My monster would have dark blue fur and grotty teeth.

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  64. my monster would be could Fluffy and she would be smooth and have pink fluffy fur to keep me warm on cold nights. Her favourite food would be candy ice cream.

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  65. My monster would have red eyes a long silvery gold tail and have black fur and long sharp claws.

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  66. my monster would be a boy with blue fur and sharp teeth

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  67. My monster would have a long thick tail,sharp claws,lots of green fur and razor sharp teeth that are peachy brown.

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  68. my monster would be called blade because he would have razor blade sharp teeth and nails as sharp as a knife his fur would be red and blue and his fav food would be kfc.

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  69. Actually, I think I'll change the electric blue on my monster to bright green, instead of breathing lightning bolts it would breath a green ball of energy to ward of thieves, large bright green outward facing horns, jet black center fur and big, catlike eyes that reflect the small amounts of light in the room. Phew! It'd be awesome if it were possible to exist

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  70. my monster would have light blue sparkly fur and a long gooey glowing tail. she also has pink spikes down her back and long claws.

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  71. James the full stop forgetter10:01 am, October 13, 2016

    drat, forgot the full stop
    so...
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  72. My monster would have fur all over with giant venomous fangs and it would lick its lips when u go to bed to scare u to sleep.

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  73. My monster would have humongous fangs and blunt claws he would also have orange fur with 10 eyes.

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  74. My monster's name is KC. He has purple and yellow fur with big black and cute eyes. He is also terrible with the keyboard, so that is why I am writing this...fbhvjbdsjkc... STOP THAT!!vghjskgf...I said STOP!!

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  75. My monster would have purple fur and blue stripes. It's claws will be groomed very well with pink nail polish. It has an incredibly long tail.

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  76. My monster would have red fur all over and big long clors.

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  77. My monster would have the sharpest fangs, the largest claws and be silent but deadly.

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  78. My monster has poison spikes on his back and a short tail and his fur colour is blue

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  79. My monster would have sharp teeth,messy fur and scratch his long sharp claws on the bottom of the bed.

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  80. my monster would have long spikes and a short tail and long fur and the colour of the fur would be orange

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  81. My monster would be cute and funny he would make everyone laugh he would be yellow and would have red spots but he would always wear a funny blue tie.

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  82. My monster would be pink and very cute it would make people feel happy and it would have a light blue heart on it's tummy.

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  83. my monster would be a bear with a long tail and bow

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  84. my monster wood bee a dragon. it's tail would be so so so long.it would be a girl.she would be scary.

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    1. I accidentally spelt would wrong sorry.

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  85. a purple fluffy soft one with a small tail

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  86. a purple fluffy soft one with a small tail

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  87. A red demon monster with tougher skin then 40000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 layers of trex skin with a tail 4000x longer then the sun. And teeth that could eat a planet in one bite. And it also had a bellybutton that could explode and destroy 20000000000000000 planets and when that happened he would be fine but the planets wouldn't be. So he is practically immortal.

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    1. nooooooooooo even earth would be blown up people are innocent you know!

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  88. I want a monster that will scratch at night and is soft.

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  89. my monster would be pink with a blue tail and green dots on her fur.
    she has three sets of arms and she pukes rainbows.
    her eyes are big and she has pointy ears and she loves to dip chicken in blood.
    her name would be SLAME

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  90. A nice, cuddly, fluffy, non-scary monster.

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  91. Describe the monster that you would like to have under your bed.Cute fluffy fury colour? Blue and yellow and my monster would love to sing and dance!>._.>kittkat

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  92. she would be as big as a book box she would have blue and silver stripes her teeth would be extreamly sharp she would have shourt cat ears long sharp shiny claws and would love to eat chocolate.

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  93. she would have a purple body and a pink bow on her head and a blue tail and a lexi.

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  94. My monster would have very soft aqua fluff on her. She would have puppy dog ears.
    It would also have a pink kitten nose. She would also look like a mouse and would
    have a neon yellow tummy and a neon rainbow bow on her ear. We would be best friends.

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  95. My monster would have ruff red fur shark like teeth

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