Tuesday 3 March 2015

Sparkly Sentences

We have been turning dull sentences into sparkly sentences by adding adjectives and adverbs. Check out some of the ones we have created.



Can you turn this dull sentence into a sparkly one?
                                       
                                    The dog ran.                                                    

23 comments:

  1. The vicious dog ran rapidly.

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  2. The scruffy little dog ran along cheekily.

    I absolutely love your sparkly sentences year 3/4! I can't wait to read some of them in your narratives.

    Mr Pearce

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  3. The magnificent dog ran swiftly under the underpass.
    Mrs Norton

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    1. I loved how you used the word (magnificent)

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  4. The bold black dog ran swiftly to the seesaw.
    Ms Taylor

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    1. We loved how you used alliteration in your sparkly sentence.

      Year 3/4 Rondos and Ravens

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  5. The old scraggly dog ran calmly down the winding road.

    Mrs Evans

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  6. The beautiful dog ran fast. Makenna Bailey

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    1. The brown sparkly dog ran gracefully

      Tajana

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  7. The scruffy young pup raced down the rough road.

    When i was in 3/4 today the teachers were using the blog to continue to teach the students about sparkly sentences. There are some great examples here. Looking forward to reading some more.

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  8. the white sparkly dog ran happyly

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  9. The fluffy dog ran quickly through the forest. - Sienna
    The sparkly dog ran crazily. - Kiori

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  10. The big grey dog chased Rio our cat!

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  11. Year 3/4 I love your fantastic sparkly sentences! The way you have used interesting words such as glamorous (a bit like me!), peacefully and majestically is amazing! Keep up the hard work!

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  12. The Radiant Red Sheep have loved reading your sparkly sentences. We hope you like our first attempt at writing a sparkly sentence.

    The happy dog ran fast to a valley with blossoms and flowers.

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    1. What a descriptive sentence. I can picture it in my head. Thanks Kindy.
      Mrs Evans

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    2. I Love It Too! It's Very Happy Sounding. I Hope The Dog Stays Happy! Hee Hee!

      Rory

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  13. The dog ran like crazy!!

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  14. The dusty old dog ran lazily down the track in the scorching hot sun. By Owen and his mum.

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  15. We were so inspired by all the amazing sparkly sentences that we combined all our ideas and came up with the following sparkly sentence.

    Through the deathly forest, the terrified shaggy dog ran away from the suffocating, silver mist.
    The Rins

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  16. The Naughty Dog Ran Weakly Up The Hill To The House And Huffed And Puffed

    Rory The Cat Cow LLama Cookie

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  17. The scruffy brown dog skedaddled away from the scary dogcatcher.

    Rory and Geoff

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  18. The tiny puppy named Patch scrambled away from the kitty-cat and had some lunch.*Woof*

    Rory

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