We have been turning dull sentences into sparkly sentences by adding adjectives and adverbs. Check out some of the ones we have created.
Can you turn this dull sentence into a sparkly one?
The dog ran.
The vicious dog ran rapidly.
ReplyDeleteThe scruffy little dog ran along cheekily.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love your sparkly sentences year 3/4! I can't wait to read some of them in your narratives.
Mr Pearce
The magnificent dog ran swiftly under the underpass.
ReplyDeleteMrs Norton
I loved how you used the word (magnificent)
DeleteThe bold black dog ran swiftly to the seesaw.
ReplyDeleteMs Taylor
We loved how you used alliteration in your sparkly sentence.
DeleteYear 3/4 Rondos and Ravens
The old scraggly dog ran calmly down the winding road.
ReplyDeleteMrs Evans
The beautiful dog ran fast. Makenna Bailey
ReplyDeleteThe brown sparkly dog ran gracefully
DeleteTajana
The scruffy young pup raced down the rough road.
ReplyDeleteWhen i was in 3/4 today the teachers were using the blog to continue to teach the students about sparkly sentences. There are some great examples here. Looking forward to reading some more.
the white sparkly dog ran happyly
ReplyDeleteThe fluffy dog ran quickly through the forest. - Sienna
ReplyDeleteThe sparkly dog ran crazily. - Kiori
The big grey dog chased Rio our cat!
ReplyDeleteYear 3/4 I love your fantastic sparkly sentences! The way you have used interesting words such as glamorous (a bit like me!), peacefully and majestically is amazing! Keep up the hard work!
ReplyDeleteThe Radiant Red Sheep have loved reading your sparkly sentences. We hope you like our first attempt at writing a sparkly sentence.
ReplyDeleteThe happy dog ran fast to a valley with blossoms and flowers.
What a descriptive sentence. I can picture it in my head. Thanks Kindy.
DeleteMrs Evans
I Love It Too! It's Very Happy Sounding. I Hope The Dog Stays Happy! Hee Hee!
DeleteRory
The dog ran like crazy!!
ReplyDeleteThe dusty old dog ran lazily down the track in the scorching hot sun. By Owen and his mum.
ReplyDeleteWe were so inspired by all the amazing sparkly sentences that we combined all our ideas and came up with the following sparkly sentence.
ReplyDeleteThrough the deathly forest, the terrified shaggy dog ran away from the suffocating, silver mist.
The Rins
The Naughty Dog Ran Weakly Up The Hill To The House And Huffed And Puffed
ReplyDeleteRory The Cat Cow LLama Cookie
The scruffy brown dog skedaddled away from the scary dogcatcher.
ReplyDeleteRory and Geoff
The tiny puppy named Patch scrambled away from the kitty-cat and had some lunch.*Woof*
ReplyDeleteRory