During our writing sessions we have been focussing on our editing skills. We have developed a range of symbols to help us improve our writing. This week we have written Cinquain poems. We used our highlighters and pens to take a pit stop to proofread and recraft our writing. Check out some of our improvements:
Jellyfish
Jiggly, deadly
Pouncing, infecting, killing
Drifting through the glistening sea
Jellies
Tigers
Majestic, camouflaged
Hunting, prowling, chuffing
Viciously stalking its prey
Cat
Harry
Talented, Wizard
Flying, adventuring, duelling
Battling the evil Voldemort
Potter
Coconut
Rough, hazel
Hanging, falling, dropping
Slowly gushing tropical liquid
Milk
What are some of the types of proofreading and recrafting you can see above? e.g. highlighting capital letters